Blog Post ＃4

Jihyeon Baeg
EW2-020
October 31, 2015

Comments were Helpful to Writing

        
       I had 3 comments of each paragraph, except the last one. It is always helpful that sharing opinions with others. First of all, when I saw a few comments of my writing, they helped me correct my paragraphs. The comments always taught me how to write well, but I was so sad when I didn’t have any comment of the last paragraph. I want to have others opinions because they are really helpful! For example, Kyeong Seok Jeong who is in other class said to me ‘Don’t start sentences with FANBOYS.’ When I wrote that writing, I forgot about that. As soon as I looked his comment, I was thankful to him and changed the sentences without FANBOYS. Second, I could share my value with others. The first blog posting is about Noryangjin-dong, and the second one is Beansbins café that is my place of studying. In the first one, I wrote my story of preparing the entrance exam of university. Comments sympathized with my efforts and congratulated that I entered Sejong University. In the second posting, I could know where their place of study is. Among them, Jihye who is in other class too also knew about Beansbins café and loved its coffee. I was happy because I could feel empathy with other students about my own places. In brief, the comments others have posted on my writings taught me a good writing and could know about others thinking.




Jihyeon Baeg
EW2-020
October 31, 2015

Learning from Other People's Paragraphs

        
       When I posted my comments on other blogs, I thought I could improve my English skills. Especially, I learnt many things in Mr. Jeong’s blog. I knew him when he gave me a comment on my blog post #2. By way of return, I read his paragraphs and could feel he is well about English. First of all, I could understand about how to write structured. His paragraphs are well-structured. He followed frame of writing in our textbook. For instance, he used his opinions with suitable examples. While I read his writings several times, I naturally acquire how to write structured. Second, I could know many new words. I read his paragraphs for two times, and they had many difficult words for me. Although they made it difficult for me to read easily, I thought those can raise my English skills. Also I understood why Gary made us do comments like this. To sum up, I could learn about the well-structured writing and acquired new words through his paragraphs.